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Real Mistakes made by Real Bates Students
"Did I do that . . . ?"
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  • Not signing a paper copy of their letter.  
  • Not including a home address or date.
  • Using informal language.   
  • Using indented paragraphs.
  • Not using proper capitalization.
  • Using casual fonts and/or emoticons.
  • Unfocused or rambling text.
  • No ‘Encl: resume’ at end of letter.
  • Not PROOFED – Spell Check does NOT catch everything!

Examples of what NOT to do . . .

Hi Bob!

Hey Bob!

Dear Mr. Bob Jones,

Dear Bob,
‘I am very detail orientated, have alot of experience and am a perfect candadate for your position.’

‘I have lead groups in a variety of settings.’

‘In case your wondering about my motivation, I can say I will be your best employee ever ☻!’

‘I can work both independently and as a team.’


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