{"id":34402,"date":"2010-08-25T16:05:05","date_gmt":"2010-08-25T20:05:05","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/home.bates.edu\/?p=34402"},"modified":"2016-01-14T12:07:25","modified_gmt":"2016-01-14T17:07:25","slug":"preamble-summer-2010","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.bates.edu\/news\/2010\/08\/25\/preamble-summer-2010\/","title":{"rendered":"Preamble: Summer 2010"},"content":{"rendered":"<h3>Questions? Comments?<\/h3>\n<p>Perhaps it was in ancient Egypt when a teacher first jotted \u201cawkward\u201d and \u201clacks coherence\u201d on a sheet of papyrus, sending a student on a long, sad walk along the Nile. Ever since, professors\u2019 comments on student papers have carried real power.<!--more--><a href='https:\/\/www.bates.edu\/news\/files\/2011\/02\/burns2960.jpg'><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"219\" height=\"300\" src=\"https:\/\/www.bates.edu\/news\/files\/2011\/02\/burns2960-219x300.jpg\" class=\"attachment-medium alignright\" alt=\"burns2960\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>At a recent campus<a href=\"http:\/\/home.bates.edu\/views\/2010\/07\/07\/chas-bates\/\"> gathering of the Consortium on High Achievement and Success<\/a>, professors and writing professionals from a number of liberal arts colleges discussed how writing assignments, including the practice of commenting on student papers, create conversations that make a student feel connected to college.<\/p>\n<p>(But not always. One student presenter at the gathering recalled the stark feedback on her very first Bates paper. \u201cI felt I had already failed,\u201d she said, adding that professors can do a better job explaining their disciplines\u2019 writing styles.)<\/p>\n<p>At Bates, professors tend to accept hard copies of papers and make comments by hand, says Director of Writing Hillory Oakes. She\u2019s encouraging professors to accept papers electronically and make their comments electronically, a practice she admits is \u201cless common at Bates than at comparable schools,\u201d though she doesn\u2019t know why.<\/p>\n<p>E-commenting, she adds, \u201cfosters a sense of conversation between the student-writer and the faculty-reader that crammed handwriting scribbled in a margin can\u2019t,\u201d she says.<\/p>\n<p>Meanwhile, the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.insidehighered.com\/blogs\/university_diaries\/professormatronic\">old-school method has loyalists like Margaret Soltan,<\/a> an English professor at George Washington who writes the blog \u201cUniversity Diaries\u201d. Handwritten comments \u201cconfirm the authenticity\u201d of a professor\u2019s presence in a student\u2019s life. \u201cThis professor and no other&#8230;did the student the honor of reading, thinking about, and writing directly to the student, in the professor\u2019s own ink, in the professor\u2019s personal scrawl, on the student\u2019s own paper.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>When a student submits a paper, it feels like an offering to the gods. And when the clouds part for the sun, you feel it forever. The poet Pamela Alexander \u201970 will always remember this comment from the late Werner Deiman: \u201cThis paper coruscates.\u201d (Look it up; she and I had to.)<\/p>\n<p>A friend remembers a professor charitably expressing how he saw evidence of promise in a sequence of papers that otherwise regressed. \u201cHe could have justifiably blown me away with a single sentence but instead he chose kindness,\u201d said my friend.<\/p>\n<p>I arrived in college armed with the literary equivalent of a musket and black powder. I wrote with some power, a style partly picked up from <em>Boston Globe<\/em> sportswriters like Ray Fitzgerald, and my aim was sometimes off. I\u2019d write about <em>Hedda Gabler<\/em> like a <em>Globe<\/em> columnist, humping one note and stuffing random metaphors throughout the paper like toys plucked from a crane game in the vestibule of Wal-Mart.<\/p>\n<p>The nadir, or zenith, was using a Buffalo Springfield lyric to define solipsism for a Victorian novel class (or was it Romantic poetry?): \u201cMy head was the event of the season.\u201d Over time, professors\u2019 comments helped me calibrate my writing style.<\/p>\n<p>Handwritten comments aren\u2019t for everyone. Sociology professor Sawyer Sylvester makes extensive editing marks on papers but eschews long written comments because \u201cmy handwriting is atrocious. For the student, it would be an exercise in translation,\u201d he says. \u201cInstead, I\u2019ll ask them to come to my office to talk about the paper.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>How old-school.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"mailto:magazine@bates.edu\">H. 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